The spotted area are mainly those 4
1. Presentation of opinion ( 给意见 )
2. Informal letter
3. Picture composition
4. Article / Report
Good words to be used
incredible, irritated, annoyed, purchased, efficient, luxurious, manageable.
Personification
eg. Swimming
1. Water hugs me.
2. Rough wave slaps me.
3. Gentle wave kissed me.
eg. Horror
1. The trees staring on her
2. the branches start to growing and touching her breasts
Simile
1. as blind as a bat
2. as dumb as a donkey
3. as loyal as a dog
4. as helpless as a babe
Phrasal verbs
1. put up with
2. burst in tears
If write articles in school magazine, at last thr muz...
Prepared by
李天才
3B
if gt give you 地位.. den muz write...
Prepared by
李天才
3B
天才学会主席
Literature ~
Spot : 2 lesson learnt
- To be as civic / conscious as R
- R saw E - trampled - shocked
- Immediately - E - rescue
- teach H a lesson - R make sure - paid 100 pounds to E parents
- good citizen - X turn away - help is needed especially - great injustice - committed
2nd - observe basic human decency ( 礼貌之类的东东 )
- wateva action tat i take
- reminded me tat someone lyk
- H has seemed - take delight - committing crimes against human decency
- trampling - little girl
- brutally beating an old man - death
- eventually punished in the end
Summary ~
Well...
my teacher say..
1st step highlight the whole sentences...
2nd step throw away explaining, examples, reason, and dunno wad thing tat start on a 'd'...
psps
3rd step throw away those 代词 lyk 'urs', 'ours'
4th step change words. ( in the exercise i saw teacher chng 1 word nia o.0 )
5th write in another paper in continuous form but without sentences linking <>
den count how many words. If 56, add 4 more words lyk next, finally.
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